"...then Dirty Deed would make the piano sound like watter hitting big rocks..." That is a good simile because it tells that the instrument sounds like the steady rain hitting big rocks. I can just hear the rythm thump thump thump! This simile can be found on page 202.

"...feeling his way like he had been struck blind..." This is a good simile because it tells how he was fumbling into the house in disbelief. This simile can be found on page 212.

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